It had been almost a year since her husband was murdered. Kate couldn’t remember much of the funeral or the months that followed. The State had handled the details, knowing police funerals always attracted both the media and large crowds.
Endel’s friends dropped by frequently, especially Joe and his wife, Bonnie, but Kate spent most of her time alone. She still lived in the same house and worked at the Center, but nothing meant much to her anymore. She went through the day on autopilot, almost unaware of everything and everyone around her.
Endel’s friends dropped by frequently, especially Joe and his wife, Bonnie, but Kate spent most of her time alone. She still lived in the same house and worked at the Center, but nothing meant much to her anymore. She went through the day on autopilot, almost unaware of everything and everyone around her.
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13 comments:
Grief is a very powerful thing, isn't it? Very well done.
Poignant. Life shatters and somehow goes on.
Powerful to say the least- you really caught the emotion of her life and loss
been there. done that. You got it right
Wow, very powerful and emotional. Nicely done!
Eep! Her husband's murder...poor lady.
Aww :( Well written snippet!
Hey! I go through my days on autopilot too! :)
Nice excerpt, thanks for sharing!
excellent, lady
This scenario always strikes a chord with me. My husband is a cop, and we've seen too many funerals.
Hi, Lisa x you choose a great six to share from your book -- which, by the way, had me reach for the tissues more times than I can remember. Tears of sadness, and tears of happiness -- you took me on a real rollercoaster of a ride with Passing Whispers! LOVELY BOOK. I really enjoyed it!!
Wow! Spot on description.
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